Not much on writing prose myself (a character flaw, assuredly), but this one’s pretty good. My only critique is that it should have ended with a more uplifting, forward-looking stanza.

Fugitive Fragments

By Pablo Perez [CC-BY-SA-3] via Wikimedia Commons5

To pour a poem onto page
select a well of ink
try one with mood
or brooding shrewd
perhaps a wistful ilk

Some brands can have a tad of fear
or fourteen heartbeats loud

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